AHH! SO NICE! SO TOUCHED!
buddy: You know I've read some interesting stuff. I've read things that would baffle shakespeare himself, yet this is simple. This is real. This piece seems to just scream BITTER LIFE!
buddy: you hold so many emotions back in the world, yet they seems to spill onto the page as if a damn had been broken
buddy: I felt like I could actually see you writing this and feel the words
buddy: I saw what you saw, and for a writer to be able to do that, that is power!


(About chapter one of my book)